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jane forest

  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'm not who you think I am

    this is a song about a women who won't let go of a man who doesn't love her, i know i helped write it,

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All We Know Is Falling.

    i won't say neat, or cool i don't believe that is appropriate for this poem. how about deep and touching? but i like it. PS any paramore influence?( on the ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the mark......prolouge

    wanna know how i got the idea for this story? i had a notebook with orca whales on the front and i wanted to think of a story that could ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The mark......part one

    sorry blah blah blah is my silly brother who forgot to log off so i meant to say check out my story!

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Runaway (Chapter1.1)

    :D :) :o

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Ultimate Game Zone- Prologue

    good story interesting.

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Slow

    strange didn't quite get what was going on but good details. :|

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Angels in Death

    this is good, interesting and very long, sad, ironic and truthful i like it.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The mark......part one

    thank you both for you criticism, i highly enjoy have a little fan club of sorts, and i have made changes were i feel necessary. :D

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: the mark......prolouge

    thank you for the constructive criticism, i am proud you both like my story, and will makes changes where i feel necessary.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Runaway

    love the poem can't wait to read the story.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: SHORT STORY: Stationary Elevator

    what a heart warming little story , the characters all learned their lessons and became better people. i love the Beatles reference.

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dragon Market: Proluge/Chapter one

    what let me get this straight your main character is a dragon? that's odd and original, i like it keep writing its a cool story

    Nov 2, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Nighttide Chapter 3: The Beginning

    whoa! slow down some much action in one short paragraph i was completely lost! what power does Anya have? who was the cloaked man? and what does drake have to ...

    Nov 2, 2009


He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
— Friedrich Nietzsche